What\\\'s Wrong

by ForeverGoneInYourEyes   Dec 12, 2006


\\\"What\\\'s wrong?\\\"
That\\\'s what you ask
When you look in my eyes
You see right past
That mask I wear
To everyone else
I cannot believe you saw past
Everything I put up
To keep out the bad looks
You just saw through me
You worked my head incredibly fast
I had to think
I didn\\\'t want to let you down
So I lied
I said always \\\"Nothing\\\"
Well that was far from it
The truth lied deep within me
Something I could barely look at
I hate seeing you worrying
You worried once that you\\\'d lose me
I worry everyday
So only know this
At least if anythings wrong
I always worry about losing you

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  • 17 years ago

    by bon

    Wow i liked the emotion and honesty you put in..good job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by bon

    Wow i liked the emotion and honesty you put in..good job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by bon

    Wow i liked the emotion and honesty you put in..good job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Need to fix those slashes, but this is a very good poem, i notice you have it twice on your profile, great poems, 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very good job on your poem. I truely enjoyed reading it. You can feel your love coming from the words you have written Excellent job!