What a Beautiful Day

by Brittany C   Dec 12, 2006


Floating on a breeze-- gently soothing,
A sent of lavender-- cresting your body,
Fluffy clouds-- floating high-- they as touch deep blue the sky.
Casting shadows-- cooling your skin,
Rays of light-- sparkling leafs-- send light shimmering on the ground.
This day is beautiful-- like flowers--
of wonderful colors.
Oh what a nice day is this-- to make you want to leave troubles behind.

Please let me know what you think of this poem. This is the first time I have written a poem like this. So please r/r/c this poem.

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  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Its great one , but i have to say that what about write it in lines i think it will be better but still great

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

    Best Wishes
    Wallace

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Omg that was wonderful. the imagery was so vivid, that I had a clear picture in my head. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    I loved it!! It like painted a beautiful image in my head! Great poems! Keep writing and I will keep reading!! 5/5

    ~Shae

  • 17 years ago

    by Naima

    It's nice! it reminds me of Kelis's Have a nice day, from her new album, Kelis was Here. I like it alot.

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