Comments : The lies of a smile

  • 14 years ago

    by A New Beginning

    Great job. Its short, sad, and to the point. And true in a way. awesome job. keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by requiem

    *shakes fist* dammit, you're really good. I like the concept of this one. It's very true.
    Thanks for the comment on my poem ^^

  • 14 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    This is great, you really show inner feelings, Well done

  • 14 years ago

    by Tim

    Very well written poem, although an area i tend to stay away from when i write.
    Tim

  • 14 years ago

    by Jade

    This poem is really good, it's very well written and it's sometimes how i feel. You have a talent, Keep it up =D
    Thanks for the comment!
    Love xo

  • 14 years ago

    by brokenangel

    Omg this is my fav so far !! i love it so much , that i was wondering if i could read it in my english class??? ofcourse the author *you* would be mentioned !

    waiting for a reply thx
    -xxxxx-

  • 14 years ago

    by brokenangel

    Ok thx !!! trust me ur name is gnna be mentioned wid a big smile on my face , it`s such a gd poem i`ll be honoured just to read it ! (K)

  • 14 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This poem out there. i love it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Kelley

    I can relate to this poem .. i love it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Alyce

    HEY you left a comment on my poem im new here so i only 1 poem for now but i have loads in a file but anyway your poem is amazing the way you explained its really good keep it up ill keep checkin to see if u have more poems cuz i like them they really ggood

  • 14 years ago

    by sweet_rebellion

    Wow! I think this is a great poem, powerful. Thank you for my comments I really appreciate them! you are an excellent poet yourself!!

    sweet_rebellion

  • 14 years ago

    by Linzii

    Hey I can so relate to this poem. It is so true.
    ~Linzii

  • 14 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Wow this is another amazing poem. do you mind if i mention you in my profile. you are one of my fav. poets, i want everyone to know.

  • 14 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Just a word:Wow...

  • 14 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh wow...I absolutely loved this!
    So strong, and heaps of emotion.
    I thought the flow and rhyme scheme worked very well together, and I enjoyed the wording and imagery muchly.
    A pleasure to read.

  • 13 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Marvelous!! really quite maginifecent such an enjoyable read...this was perfectly strong with loads of emotion. very bold and i just loved it. :] thanks for the comment by the way.

  • 13 years ago

    by dieingheals

    That is so true. My favorite part is the end. We should talk sometime i have a feeling we would get along.

  • 13 years ago

    by ephemera

    That was really good! You are really good at getting a certain feeling across and I felt all the emotions. Welcome to my faves!

    Astryd

  • 13 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Nice poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by Nyx

    (A laugh,
    Is like a blanket of lies) i've seen this done in some discussions......well done