It was a great poem, well writen and full of emotion.

Very sad indeed. If it's true, I'm sorry for your loss.

"I never dreamed I'd never see you again
Never imagined I'd get that call" -- I don't like the repitition of 'never' here. You use it three times in the space of two lines, which knows the gradual and easy flow of the poem. However, apart from this, it was very well written. Keep it up.

That was very well written. I loved the emotion and the heart. You expressed yourself very well throughout this piece. Nice work. 4.5/5

That was so sad...yet so beautfully written.
I thought the last line had huge impact and was really powerful.
I enjoyed the flow, and I thought the imagery used was great.

Great poem! well penned! and.. sorry for your loss TC :)