Nice job. you are a great poet. keep it up. i really admire ur poetry style and talent. 5/5

This is great and thx for the comment i really am thankful for it and this peom is awesome though i aint never read a mal thing but this is awesome good job i hope to read more

keenan

This style of poetry is sometimes difficult to pull off but you've done it with this poem another excellent job 5/5

Very good poem. Short and to the point. I loved it. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Marvelolus poem u really impress me, i love the message it was so great

Bryan, how sad! I loved this style and you did a great job! Are you back in the club yet?! =]
♥Ciao

I realy like the way you delivered the broken hearted poem begining with heart and ending with die

An interesting style, Malisus. Liked it how you put it twice.. oober cool. Your poem is kind of sad. I love your last 4 lines the best.

Great Job!

5/5

Oo, i know how difficult these can be, especially the rhyming when you have set syllables!
And this is amazing, it just flows perfectly!
I love this style from you! Well done
5/5
*Gem*

Beautiful poem again, you're a wonderful writer 5/5

Good work! loved it alot!!!!!!

I love this, it has a good tension, its very well written, good job!

Bryan this one is absolutely perfect! I love the way you pulled off this style....very difficult, but it has great flow and profound meaning. A joy to read!

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Again, I loved the title...once again you did such a great job. There really is SO much talent here. Great job! :)
~Midnight Sun

Wow. This was really good! You did an amazing job on the layout.. I've never heard of this type of poem, but i'm sure it was pretty hard to do. But you did a great job at it.

you know that its true. [it's]

Good job. Keep it up

Bri.x

Bryan,
Great job on this poem. It was a joy to read. I understand this is a hard form to pull off. You seemed to do it perfect. Excellent! Take Care Cindy