When you Left

by Elizabeth   Dec 14, 2006


Without touch I can feel,

Without sight I can see,

Without sound I can hear,

Without scent I can smell.

Imagine the possibilities one can achieve...

I\'m not whole, but I am all here,

Lost in my own world,

How can that be?

I have a voice but cannot speak,

I have a heart but it cannot beat,

I have a mind but cannot think,

I have a house but not a home,

I am waiting for that infamous day to come,

The day when...

I may take full breaths again...

I may be myself again...

I may smile again...

I may be WHOLE again...

There is only one key...

To unlock such Misery.

~Gallardo-Perez~ Oct. 2005

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  • 16 years ago

    by mimzy

    Nicely written

  • 17 years ago

    by andrea

    Very meaningful and well thought out. 5/5. Keep up the great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by hayley

    Your welcome. I'm glad at least one veteran liked my poem. Thank you for all you do for The USA. and by the way really good poem. Loved the last line.

    lots of love
    hayley

    ps. thanks again

  • 17 years ago

    by Heidi Harover

    I loved that poem! The last sentence put the whole thing together. Keep writin'.

    ,Heidi

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