OMG! That was amazing!! You ladies did an excellent collab! Grrr, Nat and I will write one sometime, and we will somehow beat yours! It's going to be tough, but we'll do it!!

Excellent

Absolutely extraordinary. Best wishes, and blessed be. *5/5

That was an amazing poem! Great job.
You are the best writter ((at least I think so)) you have amazing poems.
Keep Them Comming! 5/5
God Bless girl!

~*Tay*~

This was beautifully written. I loved it! You did a really great job on this. I really lik how your rhymes fit perfectly with everything. And your word choice was great. I loved this stanza the best:

Devotedly writing until soft hands ache,
Pouring out feeling in perfect rhyme,
Tears plunge onto a lake of emotion,
Gradually drowning her soul over time..

Great Job!

5/5

Whoa i say a 5/5 im still in awe how you just had the words ryme perfectly and you still let ur emotions out...

Beautiful. Just plain beautiful. The words, the collection, the perfectly poised three stanzas. Beautiful write.
10/5
~Stevie

Very well done! An accurate portrayal of the way emotions spill out into a poem. 5/5

Fantastic poem
definately5/5
well done! keep up the great work

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This isi a really good poem!

This one was really good. The only thing I think was wrong was that the flow was a bit cluttered. *5/5*

Alyson

Beautiful! This is so amazing. It just flows so well and the feelings that come from the poem are wonderful! 5/5

Wow, the flow in this was perfect. The words just seemed to come so easily for both of you: excellent collaboration. I enjoyed reading it.

My favourite stanza was this:

"Devotedly writing until soft hands ache,
Pouring out feeling in perfect rhyme,
Tears plunge onto a lake of emotion,
Gradually drowning her soul over time.."

Simply beautiful.

You girls did an amazing job.
I loved it. :]
It was another great poem.
5/5

And AGAIN.. another awesome poem!! You're really talented! this is a great poem! I enjoyed reading this :)

I love us.
I miss the SMWACE site domination. We totally ruled this site.

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