Dying To Love You

by Angel in moonlight   Dec 15, 2006


My love, oh how I long to be
in your embrace.
To feel your fingers trace over my
body.
To share intimacy, and become whole then I will show you just how wonderful it makes me feel just to know you.
I will give you all I have, and show
my passion for you.
Letting all of my worries and shyness go.
To pour out my love, with an unending flow.
Oh how I long to feel your lips
against mine.
Our souls entwine, becoming one.
Our passion burning brighter than
the sun.
Our hearts beating together in a
steady rhythm.
It's killing me inside, not being able to be with you, so I guess
you can say I'm dying to love you.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 9 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Very splendid poem. As I finished reading this, I got the feeling this poem is much similar to mine romantic poems. Even the writing technique is also similar.

    The thinking is good, the way you expressed here. You have filled this write with intense love and care. But I guess this poem could have been written in much better way. Just a simple suggestion to you.

    These both lines are truly amazing:

    Letting all of my worries and shyness go.
    To pour out my love, with an unending flow.

    Overall well done! As I said this poem is good but not good enough...so 4/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Treehugger

    Wow! that is all I can say. when you love someone so much you will do anything for them. You did a great job expressing two people in love. I love the passion and emotion of this poem 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Dying to love you wow thats sums it up
    this is really well written very emtional
    piece 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    WOW!! damn u got me missing my ex!!!

    loved this part-> To feel your fingers trace over my
    body.

    amazing!! 5/5 ! ;)

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Angel in moonlight