An inch too deep

by Linzii   Dec 19, 2006


My wrists are bleeding from all this pain.
Me tears are streaming from this Little game.
I'm losing control of everything I worked for
The blade is slicing more and more
Deeper and deeper it goes
Staring straight a head
With thoughts of being dead
My body's week as the blade goes but an inch too deep

HEy guys its not the best poem Ive wrote!! but the comments and votes are appreciated. Also check out my "She thought her life was perfect..."poem

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gracie Danielle

    Hey, youre a good writer too... read parts one and two of my poem... itll make sense that way.
    thanks for the comment.