This poem is really good. I love ready peoples work, because I seem to be able to relate to it. Keep up ur great work. I'm going to go read ur others.

Great poem, keep up the great job, i love the way you write you poems ^_^
Serenia

Wow. that was good.

if u did a few tweeks and a few add in it would make a good song.

Very nice

It was great, check out my quotes if you havn'talready much thanx, I.Live.For.You.

I like the ending... hope u feel better. happy holidays, take care, and thanx for the comment

~Rain

I Loved It!! good writing

A few spelling errors
but other than that
it was AMAZING<3
i love ittttt. :]

I Likes it ^_^