We pass by ppl everyday with secrets that we could never see in there eyes or suspect them of doing, but we never really know the real truth about who people are deep within. excellent poem 5/5

That was pretty good.

I'm impressed with the way you let your emotions flow out so well. It just seems like you have a distinct sort of flow of emotions that makes you stand out and have powerful words that speak out too people, and that’s not something you can really learn to do, its a talent born within, congrats! =D