by Justin Dec 21, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
The darkness slowly consumes me. |
by Ashlee
I love it! its swet and safe.. it makes me feel....warm inside..lmao!! great job! i love it 5/5 =] |
Not exactly a fave. Some "iffy" words and the flow kinda seemed force. The imagery was what caught my eye but it can be improved some. As it is now it's pretty good but not great. The second stanza though is kinda catchy. |