by Rob Dec 21, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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Though she's gone forever it seams and your left here all alone. |
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Not the greatest. The flow kinda messed it up because it did seem that it was forced in places. Words were a bit overused. I do like the last line for some reason. It just stands out. |
by ♥Leah♥
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I really am completely in love with this poem, it's beautiful!!!! thanx so much for ur comment it meant alot to me, thank u! |