Unusual and short, but I liked it. It had a nice flow to it. I enjoyed the sweetness in this poem. It all had such an innocent feel to it. Really painted a visual for me. Nice job! Good to see you post again, because it seemed it had been a little while!
Charisma*

"Your soft seeping skin
So golden and bare
Would a look be a sin
Not that I should dare"
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^^ Loved that stanza. I love your wording. So simple...and ever so sweet! This poem flowed so nicely. I absolutely loved it!! Don't know what else to say! Besides that I've been a bad person and haven't read your poems in such a long time! Heh. Never stop writing!! Take care!

-` Poetess

This is such a sweet poem. it speaks of longing, which i know of. you're an awesome writer, so keep it up!!:)

Very sweet!
keep up the great work!!!

HEY STRANGER!

remember me? lol. I'm sorry I ahvent kept up with all your many poems (commenting and the like) I'm glad you kept writing this peice brought back some memories of the first few poems I read of yours.

5/5

Don't forget me I love readin comments form you and then commenting back : )

- Emma

Ohhh this is probably one of my favorite poems! It's so cute and well thought out.

The flow is perfect...you did amazing with this one!!

I really liked it! it was sweet!

This was pretty good : )
short and cute
<3 jess

Very nice poem.perfect.5/5

Boringgggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!

I like this poem alot.... i wish it was me.

Oh this is a beautiful poem, its so very sweet =)
your take on sleeping beauty is so much more heart warming than my unhappily ever after one lol!

Again each stanza had the perfect flow, the rhyme was just spot on and the choice of wording created such tender imagery =)

Oh...my...goodness. This is a lucky girl whoever you wrote this for! How cute! This was a wonderfully structured piece and I loved all the cute words you used to describe this girl. Absolutely loved it :) 5

Awww this is very sweet. And delicately rhymed.