Blood Stained Rose

by xPerfect Chaosx   Dec 28, 2006


She lays, covered in lace
Her cold lifeless hands
Clutch a blood stained rose

Her face is delicate
White and perfect
Like a porcelain doll

Her body is perfectly still
The mourners weep
Their tears stain the cloth upon which she lays

She lays, covered in lace
Her cold lifeless hands
Clutch a blood stained rose

The dim candles send a flickering light
Weaving across her delicate features
Making them appear alive

There is not a trace left
Not a hint
Of her own personal Hell

She lays, covered in lace
Her cold lifeless hands
Clutch a blood stained rose

Her mask is finally broken
Her feelings strong and true
Until the day that her Hell finally broke through

Her perfect features marred
Her delicate hands scarred
Her Hell final

She lays, covered in lace
Her cold lifeless hands
Clutch a blood stained rose

The body draped in lace
Perfect for her face
To bad that wasn't the case

The church is silent
Her porcelain body lays still
The mask is finally broken

She lays, covered in lace
Her cold lifeless hands
Clutch a blood stained rose

Her perfect features marred
Her heart scarred
Her Hell complete

No one knew,
How she tortured herself
And now, her Hell is done

She lays, covered in lace
Her cold lifeless hands
Clutch a blood stained rose

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  • 16 years ago

    by Someones Sanity

    Once again you write something that is totally opposite of your personality but thats okay. lol Its good. ^_^

    //Khrystyne\\

  • 17 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    This is such a surreal poem. The flow of words are amazing...
    Thanx for the comments.. you're such a talented poet... :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was a real good piece. Sad. I really am glad i read this poem. You have a very good talent. Hope to read more of your writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    I think it makes perfect sense. It was a little cliche (*that* may not make sense) in that repeated verse,

    {She lays, covered in lace
    Her cold lifeless hands
    Clutch a blood stained rose}

    Because I've heard really similiar stuff before, and there didn't seem to be anything original about it.

    I like the genre, and think that if you could find a new edge to this idea and work off that, it would be really good.

    P.S. - please don't hate me! I hope you are open to constructive criticism, and realize I mean it only in good taste. I love your style, and I don't mean anything against your writing.

    ~Amber

  • 17 years ago

    by xRoSexInxThExRaInx

    HAY... well i think its kul.. im not very good at writing poetry so its lyk gr8 haha... I think you cud turn dat into a song... nd it does make sense :D keep writin!
    luv ya!!