What You Do To Me

by Mousie   Dec 28, 2006


You walk through that door
In a leisurely way
My heart stops beating
And I'm blown away.

You call on the phone
With your deep charming voice,
My throat goes dry
And I'm left with no choice.

You wrap your arms around me
With safety I'm held,
I'm warmed from your love
And my outer shell will melt.

Vulnerable and tenacious
We both are left,
And deep inside each other's hearts
We're always safely kept.

just a little something i wrote tonight... i dunno, i think i'm giving up on lyrics.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this.
    I thought it was really sweet and the wording was a pleasure to read.
    I thought the flow was off in a couple of places but apart from that you did a great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really liked that. To me, it was somewhat short, but that just elaborated on it's uniqueness.

    Nice work. 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by bon

    I like it, especially the last stanza

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is great! ur an excellent writer..this shows alot of emotion.i like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dacey Flame

    I like it, I like it alot!
    The rhyming is excellent, and it all makes sense =D
    Good emotion too, it makes me feel all warm inside.
    Now I despretly want a hug, too.

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