Wow, it shows great emotion and true love,
this poem remainded me of myself while i was a freshman in high school, I use to like a girl but everytime i tried to talk to her i became nervious and my throat dried.lol
nice job once again, 5/5 from me.

Awww..this was so sweet. I loved this poem! Whatever you do, don't give up on what you're doing! It's really great! Keep it up!
=)

This totally reminded me of how I felt around my 2nd boyfriend before and after we broke up . x)
It shows the emotion felt and honest love . I just like it[=
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I like it. some of it doesnt go together though.

Well i think its pretty good, great flow, no flaws that i can see, i give it a 5/5!!! love your poems keep it up!!!

This is a very romantic love poem delivered with a flawless flow

No, don't give up on lyrics. These were amazing! 5/5

I really liked this.
I thought it was very well written, heartfelt and the wording was a joy to read.
The imagery used was good and I thought it all flowed really well.

I like it, I like it alot!
The rhyming is excellent, and it all makes sense =D
Good emotion too, it makes me feel all warm inside.
Now I despretly want a hug, too.

This is great! ur an excellent writer..this shows alot of emotion.i like it.

I like it, especially the last stanza

I really liked that. To me, it was somewhat short, but that just elaborated on it's uniqueness.

Nice work. 5/5.

I liked this.
I thought it was really sweet and the wording was a pleasure to read.
I thought the flow was off in a couple of places but apart from that you did a great job.