Poisen

by Tess Beautifully Broken   Dec 28, 2006


We both had a broken heart,
But as we laid eyes on eachothers broken faces,
We fixed eachother from the start.

The tears swam in my eyes,
You kissed them all away,
Such sweet poisen that lifted my heart to the skies.

A simple embrace,
Silenced all the anger in me,
Aligned the stars intertwining them in lace.

You fixed the broken,
Part of my heart,
You know every word from my mouth that hasnt been spoken,

From the distant moon,
You're calling my name,
Sweet notations of whats coming soon.

From miles around,
I feel your love,
To silence the sound..

Of sweet, tender poisen.

NOTE: for all those that are telling me to change my spelling of poisen to poison...i realize that the spelling is diffrent but i did it that way for a reason. Its a very strange reason but it is to private to say on the internet for everyone to see. So thanks for the critque but please stop tellling me to change the spelling. Thank You! =)

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  • 17 years ago

    by last_petal

    I like it too.... keep up the good work.. bout ur title.. whooah.. its very strange but it makes ur work more unique...

  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I really love this poem.

    "A simple embrace,
    Silenced all the anger in me"

    just love that idea.. it's so well written.. well done :)

    keep writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    I like the poem but the only problem is you should spellcheck it before posting it. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Very sweet and touching, indeed.....
    ....................................

    p.s.....I think you mean....poison..........

  • Graet poem, so pwerfull and well written!! love it! keep up the work.. 5/5