Sleep

by emptysole   Dec 29, 2006


Now close your pretty eyes,
rest your tyed sole,
as of tomorrow,
you know not what the future holds.

now smile up big,
because your great,
just around the corner,
yourself you may locate.

as the sun still shines,
and the wind still blows,
flowers still open,
now fluff up your pillows.

ill look after you as you sleep,
you look like a doll,
laying so still,
and together were whole.

good night and sweet dreams.....

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  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Good stuff i got to work but i wanna
    read one more

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Just a few suggestions:
    1st stanza:
    "rest your tied sole." - should be "rest your tired soul"

    2nd stanza:
    "and say your great," -should be "you're"

    3rd stanza:
    "as the wind still shines," that kinda doesn't make sense. it would be better if you had "as the MOON still shines"

    Last stanza:
    "and together were whole."-- we're
    __

    Those are just suggestions. You can take them or leave them. Anyways. This poem was real nice. Very sweet. I liked the idea of it. Beautiful write. Don't stop writing!!

    -` Liz

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