_*Marcus*_

by vanessa Monee   Mar 28, 2004


You are so sweet
and so intense
you can feel the heat

I feel so safe when I'm with you
like nothing could ever hurt me
how you hold me as you do

When we are together our souls intertwine
we are just so alike
yet so different at the same time

The way you look at me with your beautiful eyes
They look so serious like a mystery
you take me away from all the lies

I love the way you look touch and kiss
you make me feel so special
my wonderful boyfriend Marcus

*This poem is dedicated to my loving boyfriend, is which you probably guessed his name is Marcus, and I love him very much.PLEASE comment, and be truthful, I need the criticism.*

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  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    This is a really nice poem. I love the whole thing. You commented on mine. Thanks. Keep in touch. Katie :)

  • 19 years ago

    by spunk

    that was a good descrition on what love is, you can relate so well yet, you are different, in many types of ways i guess, i liked it good job

  • 20 years ago

    by Doug

    hey vanessa, thanks for the comments on some of my poems. your poem is full of love and a lot of emotion was put into it. i love meaningful things such as this, and i also write in that style. keep up the good work, and i hope you and marcus last a long time in happiness.

    -Doug

    P.S. I just put up another poem titled "Forever In Love" I would really appreciate it if you could Comment/Vote for it. I have a ton of other ones up too, all around 3-29-04 I believe in the Love and Depression sections, so check those out too if you want. Thanks! ^^

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