Only a dream......

by Gabriel   Dec 29, 2006


I slit my wrist with blades again and again, because i have always been in a daze,

of thinking life could get better... Oh wait! heres something better,

No one ever hated anyone for anything, the world was so good it turned into a riveting

spiral of love, no greed or power with no authority of controlling towers

of them telling everyone to ignore thee, when thy gently makes a plee,

please dont take this the wrong way, i do have some memories of the love of my life, telling me stories

of the way it should have been the everlasting life that would have never ended by the knife

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow this is good!

  • 17 years ago

    by Alesia

    It's really powerful but you could use the proper puncuation a little better to make it emphisize it better.