Thisis really a wonderful poem. Your descrption is great. Thank you for the beautiful comments you left for me. Thinking of you. Take care Cindy

Wow.
That was simply amazing. The way you described everything so beautifully and so vivid. Overall, a very good write!! =] Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

I like this poem rona:)

The title to this was very well chosen. It made me want to read the poem even more. I think the meaning behind this was very well thought out and effective. It definitely gives you something to think about. I liked everything in this. lol. You did an amazing job! 5/5

I like this one... i can kinda relate to it because i have lots of secrets i keep from people.

This poem has an amazing free flow deep in its content I am impressed

Absolutely brilliant. The vocabulary was excellent, and the imagery was just so easy to picture.

Great work.

Oh wow. ^_^ That's all I can really say lol. This is so deep with emotion and feeling, that I couldn't get my attention away from it, and it left me wanting to read more. It takes true talent to be able to do that.

I see that you're just starting out on this site, and I'll tell you. Not many people that come here are this good at first =P. I know I wasn't.

Anyhow, back to the poem. There wasn't really a flow to this poem, whether that was intentional or not, it seemed to work out for me. The vocabulary you used was incredible! It made the poem all the more deep and wonderful to read, knowing that the author can actually write. =P I just found one thing I thought I might change:

[My thoughts slowly flowed into the air]
Suggestion: My thoughts slowly filled the night air.
^^It may help with the flow a little more, and it would give the reader an image into their head.

But other than that, I found this poem really worked for me. Well done and keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

For me this was one of those things you read and say whoa. It was very well written. great job

This poem is a realy great idea.. but i dont really understand the whole rhyming scheme... unless its not supposed to rhyme in that case.. the lines that do rhyme should be changed bc its hard to tell

Verry beautiful poem, nice work! The flow could use a little work though.
still 5/5 from me!
Steph

This is a great poem! i love the wording...very well written. great job! 5/5

Wow. i really liked this. the flow was wonderful and the ending wrapped things up, great job. 5/5