"The tears I cry
Are to much to bare
I can't get away
They're always there"

This stanza is great! I loved it! Great job!
xoxo

OMG. how true!!!
excellent
well done you, for putting in words how we all feel at some point in our lives.

Gem beautiful poem. This is really very well expressed. Great job!

LOL about the 3rd place thing, but thanks so much for the sweet comment about me winning! That was so sweet and totally made my day!
I found a few typos for you in this poem. heehee
okay
The soak the pillow (shouldn't it be THEY)
and...
Are to much to bare (should it be TOO much)
The only real SUGGESTION I have for this poem is here.
Whenever I'm alone
In a secluded place

I think it would flow better if you said WHEN I'M ALONE. But that's just my opinion. LOL Can't wait to read the others. I've got a contest going btw if you wanna enter. If not, that's okay. :)
Charisma*

Hey gem this poem was really deep with emotion. i felt like i cld relate to it to an extent. very well written xx

WOW!!! i loved it. It was an awesome poem...

Amazing once again ... I especially loved the stanza talking about your tears soaking the pillow. I've experienced that many times, if for nothing else than just missing the person I love. Beautiful phrases :) Keep it up!!!
~Midnight Sun

This is more along the lines that i would write but id never send it :(( its beautifully written i cant put into words how good you are at writing :)))

Aside from a few small things (to=too and the=they) I did find the reptition of the first line to leave a sad feeling : (

I can relate to this one as well except i know our love is true but we just have our ups and down and a while back we had a lot of those... its nice to know that someone can actually write about how i feel, haha even if you dont.... great great poem

WOW GEM, you are really a gem. So lovely...you made me cry..........!!!!!!! well done......

Fix some minor spelling mistakes. But I love the rhyme scheme.

Ahhh i love how u started every stanza with the same thing great job

I love this poem! I read a few of your others you write amazing poetry. I wish I can get into your love poems, Im sure Ill enjoy reading those as well. But anyways just commenting cause this poem was very well written and also cause I can relate to the feeling.