No longer there

by darkened star   Dec 31, 2006


Stuck with the pain
While dancing in the rain
A Distant girl so pretty and pure
Trying to find a cure
For this heartbreak

Day after day
Her reflection dims
Trying to stay strong
Through the darkest days
Barely holding on
The feeling of belonging gone

Her heart is broken
Its cold as steel
No longer able to feel
She climbs and climb
till she reaches the top
No longer able to stop

So close to jumping
But not strong enough
your face fills her head
And she takes one step

Thanks to u
Who didn’t care
She no longer
Exists
She’s no longer
there

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  • 17 years ago

    by somehow broken

    This is really good. i love it. you write so well and always capture the right emotions...keep writing :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Nina Star

    I really like this it so sad, and I love how you set it out. And thanks for the comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marina

    This is Beautoful.. Excellently written
    5/5 yes, i voted. thank you very much for your comment to my Peoms. I really do appreciate it... thanks
    -Marina