This poem speaks so much about a person and I can relate to it perfect.Great job.

Very...oh, I can't find the right word ...
indepth. I loved it and in a way it scared me because strange as this is going to sound, sometimes it feels like there is a darkness inside me that is slowly spreading and this poem says it perfectly!

Hugs and kisses, Rhea

All i can say is wow.... ur really really.. there are no words to describe that.. i dont know. ne way i can kinda relate to it... so that makes it better

Thank you for that comment. Truly I am glad you can relate. Please read more. I would apreciate it.

That's deep feelings in it rilly good 4/5

Deep~Feelings,
Mixed~Emotions,
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It was very good~

Thank You

And yet another great one!

This poem is amazing!
it was well written and full of emotion!
5/5
--Jess

Your work is really deep. I love it *grins* I've almost read all your work.

That was really nice! 5/5

Very interesting and creative. You created very intense and dark atmosphere, whole poem is greatly written. I like the wording in it, and the flow is good, too.
Keep up, 5/5 from me

5/5 :]

Seems I can only re-voice what's already been said before me but I honestly enjoyed reading this. Very creative, the lines jump and you're very talented.

~Joey
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Very deep, and you can deffinatally see the personal connection in this poem, some parts I would change though to make it have a little better flow, and some of the parts i would switch out words that were previously used and say different words in place of them (but thats me) over all I think you really got the message through in this poem, and I like how you used the word "alas" in your poem, it added so much more to it!

Keep writing!