A Kissing Memory...

by DeathlyAmore   Dec 31, 2006


Once treasured memories
Alas I thought shall be forever in bliss
Memories gone forever...
In my deepest sorrowful Abyss.

Photographic memories I treasure so dear
For they shall never return...
Memories I keep close to this aching heart
So it's fire may still burn...

I never again shall feel her roses
Combined in touch with mine
But I shall forever remember its taste
Like a sweet taste... of a Rose's Wine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    W-O-W. um yeah, wow.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Well damn, I can not find one single thing I don't like about that poem. After all the poems I have been reading lately, that was just astonishing. You used just a touch of descriptive words, not over-doing it.

    I really liked how you used the "Alas" and the "shall's". In most poems dots seem to take away from the poem, but I really think they add to this one.

    It's a sad poem, but you don't think sad when you read it. You think beautiful, and grace. Maybe that's just me, but this really was an exquisite poem. Very well done.

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LSI3

    That was really good.I like your work.I just started reading it.

    Kelsie

  • 16 years ago

    by Emo

    That was rilly sweet and yet sad i like it...lol
    4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Thank you.

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