Pretending...

by DeathlyAmore   Dec 31, 2006


What is the use pretending
Wishing you were here...
Imagining you were by my side
So I can feel your warmth near...

This one aching hole
I carry within my heart
Craving my beloved Reaper's
Death Don Dart

All because I cant feel her
I cant touch my one true care...
I cant feel her embrace
Only my deepest despair...

One Death Don Dart
Is all I want the most...
So I may no longer feel this sting
So I may become... a lost soulless Ghost.

Pretending Pretending in vain...
Repeating over and over her name...
Craving her touch so I can end this pain...
So maybe once alas I'll be sane...

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Nicely done. The last part just didn't really match the whole rhythem of the poem and the flow.You used aaaa instead of what I saw in your other stanzas abcb. Still a wonderful poem.
    I'll give you a 5/5 God Bless

    ~Tay~

  • 17 years ago

    by Freddie

    I agree. very descriptive. i luved it. keep writin!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow excellent job on your poem. very descrptive. Loved reading it!