Comments : Dancing ghosts

  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I liked this poem!
    It was very good!
    =-)

    (check out any of mine if u want)

  • 14 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Very nice. *5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Boogie

    Wow!! loved it !!! i especially loved the title! hehe .. =p

    5/5

    rate/comment me!

  • 14 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Lol yeh my poem is about how i was abused as a child and people would ask me if anything happened and i would lie and say no. it's confusing tho. u kinda have 2 get wots in my head, lol. i like this poem of ur's too. it's also heaps easy to read i like them like that. 5/5
    thanks for the comment

  • 14 years ago

    by PoetryHeart

    Wow you are so awesome! i love your vocabulary. you have amazing words in your poems and you have such an amazing talent never stop writing chica!

  • 14 years ago

    by lobotomy patient

    Y does it seem to me that u hav been used and abused by ppl.....

  • 14 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    What a twisted shadow
    The lights cast,
    Dancing ghosts are all that
    Remains of my past.

    i have had a harsh past, not because i was abused but because i was simply an emotional and depressed child. when i look back most of my memories arent all that happy, and if they are then they are kinda happy sad. i wrote a poem about it - but i think this poem portrays the emotions really well. i love the way that you always use imaginative and different words. it is like every poem is unique.

  • 14 years ago

    by SuicidePrincess

    Thank u so much i have read all ov ure poems omg i cnt beleve i am talkinf 2 u lol thank u so much hear if u have msn faye_343@msn.com

  • 14 years ago

    by Derek Walden

    I don't like to talk about my past, or think about it, so i suppress things, and thats why i write things like that, my dreams are much worse though, that might have been sad but they are horrifying, i loved your poem and and the part at the end about not being able to get back up was a fitting end.

    how can such an angel fall?
    when she may never had wings at all?
    on the razor throne killing my time
    i still feel them tearing off mine...

  • 14 years ago

    by Jeanette

    Very good poem, thank you for commenting on mine! 5/5 keep it up(=

    Jeanette

  • 14 years ago

    by mier

    This poem is truly amazing... the flow of the words and the emotion is so deep...

  • 14 years ago

    by Brittany

    Great job. Keep up the good work. Thnx 4 ur cmnt. Ur doing great. 2 weeks is a while. Ive stoppd for a lil over a month. Im proud of myself and you too. Keep n touch luv always brittany

  • 14 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    Groovy, the last verse is really good because it's singing to me :). laura xx

  • 14 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    Groovy, the last verse is really good because it's singing to me :). laura xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Anonymous

    This poem is amazing ... It sounds like you have happiness in ur life but you sometimes feel depression.

  • 13 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I could very much relate to this poem and it really hit me hard. Excellent work!

    ~jas~

  • 13 years ago

    by Solus

    Sometimes those ghosts come back to haunt you......

  • 13 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    :'[. So sad. I enjoyed this poem also. I think instead of doing 7 im going to do all your top poems you have (not the latest i cant see them ]: computer is messed up)