Lol yeh my poem is about how i was abused as a child and people would ask me if anything happened and i would lie and say no. it's confusing tho. u kinda have 2 get wots in my head, lol. i like this poem of ur's too. it's also heaps easy to read i like them like that. 5/5
thanks for the comment
What a twisted shadow
The lights cast,
Dancing ghosts are all that
Remains of my past.
i have had a harsh past, not because i was abused but because i was simply an emotional and depressed child. when i look back most of my memories arent all that happy, and if they are then they are kinda happy sad. i wrote a poem about it - but i think this poem portrays the emotions really well. i love the way that you always use imaginative and different words. it is like every poem is unique.
I don't like to talk about my past, or think about it, so i suppress things, and thats why i write things like that, my dreams are much worse though, that might have been sad but they are horrifying, i loved your poem and and the part at the end about not being able to get back up was a fitting end.
how can such an angel fall?
when she may never had wings at all?
on the razor throne killing my time
i still feel them tearing off mine...