Emo.

by meggg28   Dec 31, 2006


Sinking, drowning.
[The hardest choice]

Crying, frowning.
[I need to hear your voice]

Cutting, bleeding.
[If you took your life]

Emotions, feeding.
[I would pick up my knife]

Despair, loneliness.
[I want you back]

Love, distress.
[It's my emotions you attack]

Restless, yearning.
[Thoughts of killing myself, through my mind run]

Suicidal, burning.
[If I can't have you, I want no one]

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You can read this poem three ways, as it is on the page [which you should do if nothing else]. Only the words out of the brackets, and only the words inside of the brackets. Either way it still makes sence [that is why I am proud of it, it's got 2 hidden ways to read it =D].

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Wow great job
    5/5
    that was excellent
    =-)

    (check out any of mine if u want)