Walk away

by Broken Promises   Dec 31, 2006


I don't know what to say
I don't know what to do
I don't know if I should feel
The way I feel for you
You don't care
About anything I say
You don't listen
You just walk away
I try to make you listen
I try to make you care
But no matter what I do
You'll never be there
When I look at you
You look away
What did I do
What did I say
It's no use
I'm going to stop trying
Because if I don't
I'm going to keep crying

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  • 17 years ago

    by Norbert

    I like that poem. real good.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I thought the flow and rhyme in this poem was very good. I really don't have a suggestion because I pretty much liked it as is. You could feel the heat behind this, almost as if you were angry when you typed it. It sounds as if it just flowed from you onto the screen. Good job Broken Promises!
    Charisma*

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