Comments : Evaporated Tears

  • 14 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Wow thats an amazing poem
    it has a lot of meaning and its very powerful
    keep up the good work

    xoxo
    -chelseaa;

  • 14 years ago

    by Jessie

    Heyy
    I just read your comment to me. Thanks for the comment :) I also love this poem. Your an awesome writer. Keep up the good work :)

  • 14 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    "It won't fizzle out for days when I cry.
    Thunderstorms are the closest I get to you."

    This couplet is amazing! And I get what you're saying! I loved the poem girly!
    xoxo

    P.S. I added you to my favorites!

  • 14 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I LOVE this poem, Charisma!!! This was absolutely amazing...and I swear I'm not exaggerating (sp? lol) You did so good on this. Keep it up!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 14 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    This poem is really amazing, such an original idea. it reminded me of a song (thunder by boys like girls) great song, great poem! well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper. May 2007 be a good year for you…peace

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow! What a wonderful write. I love the way you compare your emotions to the storms. Excellent job!

  • 14 years ago

    by heather

    Woooow. keep up the good work! that's really good and sweet

  • 14 years ago

    by Gem

    Some lovely comparisons in this one hun, you wrote it with passion and emotion and it makes the word come to life.
    Enough drivel now, lol, it was excellent!
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (And yes, its the day first, then the month, then the year so for today, i would write 15/01/07. I write that underneath my old ones so people know how long ago they were written =)

  • 14 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I love how you used rain and thunderstorms as a metaphor with your emotions.. the last line was my favorite... its so original.. great flow and rhyme.. yet another amazing piece!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ariana

    Nice work, i particulary liked your ending it fit well and summarised the whole piece up.

  • 14 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. I really liked this poem also but it isn't your best one though. I think you could twist it a little better to make it sound better. But other then that I give you a 5/5.

  • 14 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Completely amazing! it has sooo much depth and makes soo much sense...i dont think i could have even gotten close to wording it that well even if i were u times 3 =D

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Wow. This was beautiful. The words, the meaning, the feeling. I loved how I could picture the lightening and the rain, and how I could hear the thunder.

    5/5.

  • 14 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Aweh ! Love this. Brought tears to my eyes `cuz it made me think of my ex and how we have this whole rain thing, had anyways. But you wrote this so flawlessly, once again...but I`ve come to expect nothing less from your poetry though. Great job.

    5.5
    :]