Why did I have to meet you?
It is right in front of these eyes,
Taunting, teasing
And all I can do for it is cry.
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Awww Courtney this last stanza is such a tear jerker.
So close yet so far out of reach.

Wonderfully penned love poem Courtney.

Take care deary
I have entered your poem in the contest hun

I think these are more sad than love. You talk of heartbreak and saddness. But I love them! Again you did an amazing job. Your rhyming and flow was amazing. Beautifully written. I loved this part:
Never will we be together,
I told you that I did not feel like this at all,
I lied and I am so sorry,
This love will be my downfall
Amazing.
5/5

Your poetry takes me to a different world, which is my past. I feel each and every word you wrote as I can relate to them, great job

Hey girl really nice poem just like all the rest.

That last stanza was so beautiful yet so sad.
Wonderfully written, I really enjoyed this.

Love is so very special and everybody searches for it, but most of the time it only leads to heart break excellent write 5/5

Another one of your poems I can relate to! Awww..I love this poem! I just wish you could've added more =P cos I really enjoyed reading it! Well done! Can't wait to read more of your poems! =)
5/5

This was a very passionate write. The flow was almost undisturbed and the rhymes were not forced. It made for a great read. My only suggestion (and I know this may be hard, I myself have a hard time withthis sometimes) but the longer sentence may red a lil easier if you would be able to shorten them. i do that all the time to...and sometimes it is hard to shorten those sentences without loosing the sentiment you are trying to portray.
All in all it was very pleasurable read I thought.

Loved the last stanza!!
Very emotional write, great job.
5/5

"Never will we be together,
I told you that I did not feel like this at all,
I lied and I am so sorry,
This love will be my downfall"
*That's my favorite stanza, it's so amazing!! i was so close to srying though when i read it b/c that's wut my ex said to me when we were going out... ohwell, it made me love the poem that much more, great job!!

Forever*Yours

I read this poem once before, and I must have rated it a five -like I planned to do again- but I guess I forgot to comment?

Well, this was an excellent poem. The opening stanza was wonderful and I loved how everything just flowed. [:

An okay poem.. the flow is off in the middle two stanzas and its very simple... the emotion wasnt as strong as i think it could be

Omg.. this poem spoke to me, because I have felt almost the exact same way with a guy before, and it wrenches at your heart. It's full of raw emotion, and I loved it 5/5 dear!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

Awww. i can relate to this poem fully. its so hartbreaking to just be friends with the one you love. chin up

much love and many kisses,
bex

I wish you the best, if this is a bout you...sometimes things can really just turn around!

UHMM EHH i fell like this totally 5/5