Wow, Cindy.. This was amazing. It was very sad.. But, absolutley beautiful. It had so much emotion in it, and it flowed so very well. My favorite stanza was:

"Another day to see her son,
Watch her grand-children play and run.
She is starting to get tired now,
just one more day to see the sun"

^^ That just really got me..It's sad. But so sweet at the same time.. AMAZING! Keep it up, Hun.

Bri.x

This poem pours with true emotions from deep within your soul. I can not imagine the pain you must go through missing Uncle John. You have so many people who love you.I know no love can compare to that of your soulmate. One day you will be reunited in heaven and it will be those of us left behind grieving but we will find comfort in the fact that you will no longer be suffering physical or emotional pains. I love you Aunt Cindy with all my heart and soul. Your poems are beautiful just like you are.

That is so beautiful. sad. letting go of loved ones is hard, for the person dieing and the loved ones of the dieing. 5/5.

Oh, oops.

shouldn't Him be capitalized.... well if you are referring to God it should.....

Beautiful.

This one is amazing

Man...that was good...the ending made me gasp a lil

I like how I can relate....amazing

That was so sad, i've said it once and i'll say it again, you are so talented. I love you, your work is the most awesome i have ever read. thankyou for sharing this poetry with us, you are an emotional person, I can see and this poem just shows that.
well done
xxxxx

Cindy i love this poem i had tears in my eyes il ove you cindy i hope to see you soon
*SHan

Wow.
That was tremedously painful to read because I could feel your sadness pouring out through the whole poem. I know what it feels like to lose someone and I still am finding it hard to deal.
Wonderful poem hun! Keep it up!
Stay strong. =]

Stephanie

I think it is one of the best poems I have read in a long time thank you for sharing it xxxx

This is so very sad...but so beautifully written...a heartbeaking piece about sadness...it really captured me.
Excellent work.

This poem is very sad. it reminded me of one of my grandma's because she's kind of losing her mind-ish. it was great overall 5/5

Thanks for you kind comments on my attempts.....but would seem you and your family are in a different league.
This is a beautiful poem..simply
beautiful.... 10/5

Gosh where to start..
im sooo sorry that this happened to you
i couldnt amagin dealing with this
but you seem to over come all this the only way you no how..
you seem like an amazing person..
to still be strong after all you have been put threw..

stay strong hang in there...

much love

A pleasure to read.

That was a powerful poem, and it made me realize how short our time here on earth this is. I'm sure you will keep up this awesome work.
Always a fan,

--Namida

Damn...u know how to potray all the sadness that u have in every inch of urs. Reminds of a line of my poem
"Life is a simple riddle where rules are never clear"

Great write dear...u simply rock

all the best and take care

Ok this one done it... was owndering how many more i could get through without the tears coming down... here they are!!

i have said it again and will say before, there is just something about your writing that is reaching out to me and telling me to read and its very amazing work. i feel very honoured to have read your work.

and i do wish i had a magic wand for you and your life, i do not know you but feel like i do.

you have touched my life with your writing... thank you xx