Great poem :) thanks for the comment

Thanks for the comment your very good!!!!

Your totally right! We are not free or safe in this world! Your poem has a great message! It's amazingly written as well...
I really loved your poems that i read! Your so good at it.. Keep writing!
Take care..
love,,
haya 3gab =]

Very loud and strong your words are in this piece. Great job!

Wow..
This was fantastic!
I thought the rhyme scheme and flow worked very well and I enjoyed the imagery muchly.
You did a wonderful job on this.