This is a very good poem, i like how it came out to be depression in the end, very good poem 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Wonderful write. I liked it. The flow and the structure was good. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

I think you really should add some puncuation I feel as if I flew through that.. Rushing Rushing.. But you have caught my interest.. How did your account get deleted? -Curiousity-

About the Poem:
I loved your last stanza the best, it really hit me. you did a great job on this babe. Your flow was pretty dang good. You got some talent!

Excellent

5/5

I loved this poem, dark and with a twist well done.

This is very well done. You did such a excellent job describing depression!

An amazing poem, keep up the great work, you are a talented poet,