Crying in the rain [re-done ?]

Crying In The Rain
Cause No One Cared
To See What Was Truly Happening
To Me

They May Look But They Don't See
They Try And Help
But They Don't Really Care
If Only You Could See
What's Truly Happened To Me

*The reason why i re-wrote it was because some people told me i shouldn't of put the dots so i re-wrote it without all the dots, and yeah