New Years

by Tiffani   Jan 3, 2007


As the year ends,
and we try to start a new...
to better ourselves,
but how many of us fallow through?
Typical resolutions so shallow and untrue,
lose that weight,
quit that smoking habit...
whys the world so selfish?
i have really had it...
Its not all about the party,
or what your drinking...
New Years is so much more,
come on people start thinking...
A chance to start over,
and improve our act...
toss out the old year,
and never look back...
if people started to care about others,
i swear id have a heart attack...
Its sad to see how shallow the world is today.
surgeries and diet pills...
throwing their born identity away...
for once id like to see someone natural and happy with themselves,
Its sick to see the things today,
u can buy right off grocery store shelves...
energy drinks and bottle tans,
sometimes i wonder what will happen with this world...
does it have plans?
the fake one time apply fix it things,
they don't work miracles.
they are totally insane...
they can NOT fix your endurance,
willpower,
or BRAINS...

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  • 16 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    They can NOT fix your endurance,
    willpower,
    or BRAINS...

    i love it....great topic to write on. except there is one spelling error..."fallow"...it should be "follow"

    superb job

    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    I liek this it is veryy true.. I can tell the angry put in to it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffani

    Thank u its great to see ppl who agree with me if more ppl started to see it this way i think things whould change u kno? well thanks for commenting

    with love

  • 17 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    I thought this poem was excellent! It is so true. And it is good that you see that. By your writting I kinda of since you have a very good personallitly about things. Very Nice. :]

    Rachel