Nice poem again! Beautiful imagery and flow.

What a beautiful poem Rachel. The way you describe spring is beautiful. Excellent job!

Wow nice poem and nice write. I really enjoyed this work of yours. I look forward to reading and enjoying more of your thoughts put to paper. May 2007 be a good year for you…peace

GREAT WRITE. NICE WORD USAGE.

Ya gotta love the happy poems =] good work

Wow! Absolutely beautiful, hehe i love spring, and i loved this poem, it was flawless. Great work.

--Steph

This is an awesome masterpiece in my opinion. My hope is that there is a way this poem will be preserved in a anthology to relay its beautiful and timeless message

Wow, the flow was perfect and the words were just i was in awe..good job! keep writing..and looking forward to reading more of your work

THANK GOD FOR SPRING =)! This poem is truly lovely! I enjoyed reading it! I think I should read this whenever it's close to spring. It gets me into that happy mood =). Well a few things I'd like to point out:

a rainbow forms our *savior's* (Savior) crown.
Thank God for such natural splendor,
and for all the life *he*
(He) chose to render.

Coming from a Catholic school we were always told to capitalize He, Savior etc. if we are referring to God.
Overall, it was great!
5/5

There's no doubt that spring is the best season of the year, just the way everything changes is so beautiful. Great job on the poem, the flow was excellent and the words were chosen well 5/5

You have a different writing style from what I normally see on this site...poems are normally organized into stanzas and such, but you express your entire poem in one section. it's not bad, far from it, it lends itself to the topics you write about, and instead helps to sort of unify the finished product.

you write so fluently with everyday topics. I struggle with that type of writing. my writing is emotional and raw. I like your stuff :)

I love this poem.. its soo amazing.. the only thing i suggest working on a little more is tha last line in the first stanza.. its a little long and doesnt really flow with the rest of the poem

Again, beautiful, flow was great and so was wording, you're very talented. 5/5

Very very well written =]
i love spring so much,although where i live the winter is to long.the word choice was excellent.5/5 again.
--lexie

That was beautifully. I could constantly picture a beautiful spring day in my mind - gorgeous.

Nice work. 5/5.

I love this! its - in my own strange way - cute, but like i said - thats just me!

Narc xxx

* hey this is very good. i loved it. it had many words that i do not see very often in poems. but you managed to use em to their full advantage.

i gave you a 5. it is great.

David

This is really creative good job!! keep it up!

This poem was so cute, like a bunny hopping around in a forest. Very truthful, of course the rhyming was magnificent. All your poems are lovely, and that's why I added you to my favorites. great job!
5/5

This would be very sweet for children to learn....perhaps as a song......