Hey thank you sooo much for entering this poem in my contest!! i really enjoyed reading it, i think it is such a powerful love poem. I like how it has good flow, and how it rhymes.. i love poems that rhyme :).. I think it was a very strong ending, especially because of how you repeated that line you used at the start. So i rate this poem 5/5.. well done xox
5/5. Amazing poem. Yeah school wouldnt let me do love poems but im at home now. I really liked how you had written this poem!! I enjoyed it. I kind of have a poem thats kinda like this it's called Played Heart. But idk. My poems arent very good. Great job on this one.
Man, Charisma! You are such a talented writer. I mean your work is professional and completely heartfelt. I can only hope to become a writer like you one day. Such amazing, tear-jerking work. Amazing job!
It's beautiful, truely. Once again I can relate. I dont want my ex to ever forget me because i know i won't ever forget him. There's a quote that goes, "I must have been stupid to think that lil old me could rock your effin world" I hope i rocked his enough that he wont forget me. lol.
I love this.