Supernova

by lashes   Jan 5, 2007


New years day
a blank canvas
enthusiasm unrestrained
orgasmic fanaticism
reaches its crescendo
a supernova burns away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I like this a lot.. its got great descripition.. awesome job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's so true that we kinda lose sight of what we want to change in the new year and just like the supernova our new resolutions burn away far too quickly amazing job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lashes

    Ps what are the FPCandD boxes for i'm new and haven't got the hang of this site yet.

  • 17 years ago

    by lashes

    Its supposed to be short like a supernova a star that shines brightly for a short while then burns out,
    in case you didn't get the metaphores it's about new years resolutions not lasting very long [giving up smoking]
    thanks so much for reviewing my poem i'm truly gratefull i have a look at your now thanks.