Awwwww. its so sweet!! I like it a lot Keep up the good work i rate it 5/5

Laura

5/5 awww thiz poem waz so sweeet!:)) i wizh a dude loved me like that! well keep writing cuz u really good!
thatz all i gotta say im out
~!*Peachez*!~

Its sweet... 5/5 You have a great choice in words. your gf would be proud.

I love it its sooo sweet and romantic
i think i just feel in love lol

Ah'wwww thats cute and sad but still really good ilove it

Thats really cute!
good choice of words and rhyme.
good work!

I liked it...It was real sweet, something from the heart. Makes me glad to know there are still some sweet guys out there and that not all of them are jerks...

This is a really sweet poem, filled with so much hope i really loved it and the rhyming was great to. keep up the great work. that girl should feel very lucky!