Comments : Almost Okay

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    I absolutely love this poem =) it sad and full of emotion..I think its great and the rhyming..I love it =) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Now, this is something amazing! I loved it! Great job sweetie!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    Damn!! this poem is soo amazing! i really envy ur talent .. keep on writting.. coz im looking forward to reading ur next poem! =p

    5/5 !

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    I loved the last line and your flow was consistant the whole way through..
    You never fail to disappoint me =)
    Excellent hun
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by mazie

    Reli gr8 poem so full of emotion i loved it and i love just readin thro ur peoms sometimes they always make me feel better. well u did gd agen well dne 5/5.Mazie.X
    (ps thank you for the comment on my poem i took on bord wat u sed n i wrote it on sumfin a m8 sed 2 me n she a single teenage mother)x

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Ah damn!
    You know what i mean, lol.
    You never disappoint me! Thats what i meant. My mind is all swirly today. I blame the antibiotics! lol
    5/5 again!
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by CondescendingHeart

    Heyy;;
    good job... this is for my other contest right?
    Well this poem wasnt bad... i didnt really like it that much... and the ending was all that great. But it was okay... 3/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Oh my gosh.. every poem i get just gets better and better.. i definitly chose a good winner! hehe lol.. i really like this poem.. the whole short and choppy lines.. totally my favorite style.. simple yet still you get your emotions out.. AMAZING JOB!! my favorite poem so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!