Wow David that was really good i liked alot... 5/5 always
Kate

Aww sweet! great job 5/5

Doing something with good intentions leads to good endings.
thanks for sharing this!
Marjan

Nice work this sounds great and my brother loved it said it was true

This poem was portrayed very well i liked this because it was so true. nicely written poem you have here david. Well done ~mel

That to me was your al time best David, I have an uncle in Iraq, so it touched my heart. Thank you!

your servent also,
-Liz-

Spread throughtou the world America\'s light
`throughout

i sallute you
`salute

Anyhow, as I've said before : You write such poetry in a way that makes others want to read even if they do not think of these topics often . Your words are simple; your poetry short -- but your pieces hold such hope that fill people with warmth . Especially those connected somehow the Iraq war .

The ending was superb, and beautifully chosen .
Another great one from you (:
..__MiNDYY