I really liked this poem. It's very inspiring

Great job davey

I will fight till the lights go out.
I will fight with the sword of my words.

I liked this poem. thanks for sharing!
take care,
Marjan

I really like this poem. Your style is so cute. I love how its all sorta like in perspective of the knight in shining armor. Good job

I loved this!
The rhyme scheme and flow were perfect, and the imagery was great.
You did a fantastic job on this.

I love this poem! my fav of yours!!!

Nice write Dave
5/5 your favorite friend
Kate

Your an amazing writer and you carry great skill. good job keep it up

Whoa . Like it . For some reason, a knight in shining armour comes to mind :P

yea thought i fight alone
my hope and light are the best ever known

BTW did you mean "Yeah though I fight alone" ? XD Cuhs` I was like Whaaa ? when I read that line . The flow was really good, and I just liked it .
..__MiNDYY

Lol I really liked it! Kudos 5/5!

-Liz-
~of life to live~

Lovely lovely write.soo true....very well worded n neat write...lol...even i hd a knight's image in my mind!:D
Simple n Perfect..n flowed well too.great wrk!..another 5/5 as always!
xxPoojaxx