Gift of All Time

by Gasttlee   Jan 5, 2007


Time is precious
and every second should be used wisely.

Time is rhythm
never coming to a halt.

Time is fast
agile as a cheetah.

Time is joyful
for any second is a lasting moment.

Time is a force
with unbeatable energy.

Time is a schedule
turning every second.

Time never stays the same
for it has it's own arrangement.

Time has no finish
for as energizer it keeps going and going.

Time is the one thing you'll always have,
so live every second to the very last.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This poem interprets what time really is and saying you shouldnt waste it

    Time is a force
    with unbeatable energy

    is saying u cant go back in time or try and out run it cause its always going to be there.

    i like this poem good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Great poem! I'm a muslim and one of our heros(Immam Ali) said: "Time is like a sward if you don't cut it it cuts you"

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I enjoyed this...each word written had so much depth and meaning, with an insanely great message behind the overall piece...beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Superb poem and Im sure I will give you max. The message is very clear and its very beautiful. I have a little suggestion

    The line "Time has no finish" seems to be odd because finish is not a noun, so instead you could use a gerund like "finishing" or a noun like "end".

    But it is a great poem
    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Twobit

    This is deep and very strong! 5/5

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