Just Leave

by Tripp   Jan 6, 2007


This lifestyle, this life of mine
I'm not well, but I may seem fine
some stuff happens you don't see
and telling you just doesn't matter to me

Behind the scenes stuff goes down
turning my face into a perpetual frown
stuff happens I'd rather not talk about
I wanna leave now, I want immediate out

I wanna get on a taxi, and just leave
until that day I'll hold my breath; not breathe
holding it for my day of release
holding for the day when I finally have peace

I'm feeling quite unwanted and worthless
since day one I've been searching for a purpose
I've found none, I have yet to succeed
soon the devil's call I'll heed

Leave this place, now and forever
to be re-united once again never
in the pits of hell I'll eternally burn
I've walked down this path
never to return

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Deep! I understand where you are coming from. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychel

    Wow, tripp. I love this.

    I wanna get on a taxi, and just leave
    until that day I'll hold my breath; not breathe
    holding it for my day of release
    holding for the day when I finally have peace

    ^^ that stanza just like, speaks to me. Beautiful work, tripp. keep it up!

    ur cut-free friend (for now)
    ~rAY

  • 17 years ago

    by Mark Harris

    Lol I got freaked out when I saw the title 'cause I have one called "Just Leave Me Now." Frankly I think yours is awesome! I admit I have a slight fetish for the afterlife references and you weaved them in good. Even if they're not used in an afterlife sense, but more a metaphorical sense I find them cool. Not just that though, the whole poem's good. :D xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    This poem is super deep and full of meaning, Everybody tries to find themselves at one time or another. Excellent job bro 5/5

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