Amazing... i am speachless... i loved the ending the most... it had lots of hidden meanings in the poem as well... you really got the talent... 5/5

This is a wonderful poem becca, reminds me of lyrics, i love the repition of the first line, i give it a 5/5!!!

I've read this one before as well. Like i said in my other comment, the mental images that were conjured in my mind were wonderful. you have such a talent for writing, keep up the good work. 5/5

Aww, that was so sad, so sweet though. i could really feel the pain the character was going thru. well done once again!
much love and many kisses,
bex

This is sooo good!!

I loved how you used seasons to describe the pain. I believe each season contains a feeling that you don't feel in another season, literally. In winter, you're always happy, and cuddly.. And, this poem proves that. :D

You did a great job, I absolutely loved this poem. I think its' one of your best because of how it's worded and the emotions it gives to the readers.

Keep it up, hun.
<3 Teria.

Such strong images, i loved this. it really got me thinking about what love can do to you. thanks for sharing x

Nice poem! Love It!!