Outstanding poem! You had a good flow, wonderful rhymes and the way you put it to work was enjoyable with so much meaning. keep it up. I see lots of talent.

Very nicely done. This poem had very well vocabulary useage. VEry well done!
Keep up the great work.
God Bless 5/5

~TAy

Oh, this is awesome. I love it. Well penned and nice flow. Great job! 5/5

This poem is awesome!! i was going to write my favorite part, but i love the whole thing!! anyways, this is great, ur an amazing writer!! 5/5!!

*Shawte*

5/5. OMG AWESOME! Thi's is like the most amazing poem that has touched me. GREAT WRITE!

Well done! I loved the way you wrote this poem. The words you used were great! And the flow was smooth! Great job!
5/5

Good job! Your writing in this was great! The flow was real g

Good job! Your writing in this was great! The flow was real g

Good job! Your writing in this was great! The flow was real g

I loved it, really beautiful, nice job! flowed great and the wording was great 5/5

Wow.. i really like this poem.. its amazing.. it has great flow and i love the whole scenario .. its just an amazing write.. keep up the good work!

Hey, I took your advice and I extended my knowledge of my vocabulary, I made a new poem called But You Won't Get Me :) Please Check it out.. and bravo.. this poem was wonderfull

Wow. i really dont know what to say about this poem... i was captured from the beginning! good...GREAT job!

It rhymes so well. i just read it over and over again. its that good!

i gave you a 5! excellent.

David

I loved this poem!!
The flow and rhyming was great. As soon as i read the first stanza i was hooked and the rest of the poem was fantastic, i really liked it :)
5/5

So very sad...yet so beautifully written.
I really loved this, I thought the imagery used was breathtaking.

This is such a sad poem...very well written...excellent job!

~michelle~

Wow this was AMAZING! I love it.. very short but so full of emotion and depth. I have a file that I keep all of my favorite poems in I think that I'm going to add this one, (dont wrry I will give you credit for it, and its only so I can read them whenever I like I'm not planning on doing anything with it, but if that bothers you let me know and I wont) I kind of get the feeling that this is about bullying and stuff like that. I love it way to go. plz comment on my poem as well. thanx

Amazing poem like the style and the flow