WEIRD but yeh it does sing i spose but you gotta keep on singing for it to really have effect i know that its really hard n stuff but yh good try :). laura xxx

Wow. Its dark and twisted. in a good way. Its real and makes alot of sense.
Thanx for the comments.
5/5

Koriey

This is really good! You put it in a perspective that i never thought of. knowing you can put words together like that is amazing.

Good Job

Learn to deal with the pain you feel
for the wounds that don't heal

you could make that a good poem, i like it

The mask - i liked it alot.. youd write?
couldnt reply on my email.

Wow,so good honey,so moving and ypu express well what you feel,well done 5/5

I'm reading your poems & i'm sitting nodding my head with every one. you are gifted. you make me feel it. you make me feel me! don't stop writing. you are f*#king awesome!

Wow i get it..i totally understand what your talking about. i love it

Hey I really like this poem! U write some good shit. Thanks for the words of encouragement . I've been praying for u. Congrats on your 8 days clean. Hang in there. You've really got talent. How old r u? Your profile says 1. Bye for now.

Fantastic......the only word to describe it

Thanks for the comments on my page, and your right, I am a dreamer. But dreaming is for fools... and fools belong in new orleans and new orleans is gone... am i right or am i right... keep in touch. loves, gracie

Powerful sh*t here, man! an awesome personification of the addiction. dang- i love your stuff!!

Hey there. I read your comment on someone elses poem.
I just wanted to say that it's hard but it isn't impossible. You need to find a solid reason for giving up........ what if suddenly you woke up and your wife and life had disappeared?? Would it make you stand up and fight or would you sink into a deeper depression and continue a life of being absent minded, paranoid, oblivious, and many more confidence destroying features when addicted??
I know how you feel and I'm determined to fight the temptation to get more. I have many reasons for quitting but my main reason is that it destroys relationships. I've lost two people i love through being constantly wrecked (and if i'm not high, i'm like a mental person!!)
Sorry this is a long comment, lol
If you want to give up with me we can chat via msn if you have it.
Take care
Kirsty

This is awsome! It is a perfect describtion of what addiction does to the people who have fallen in love with the drug.

Deep. That pretty much all i can say. It is the best poem i've ever read and i don't have a better word for it then Deep. Not many ppl can realy write about how they feel or why they do but you nailed it! Great work and thx 4 the comments!

xxxxxxxlost lovexxxxxxxx

You nailed it bro! superb poem. damn i'm speechless. Inspiring thats what you are. And you gave my poem a 5/5 (Acids and Bases) this is a 10/5. 200%
way ta go

You nailed it bro! superb poem. damn i'm speechless. Inspiring thats what you are. And you gave my poem a 5/5 (Acids and Bases) this is a 10/5. 200%
way ta go

Intense and interesting are just two of the many words that could describe this poem and its troubled auther {sp}

amazing writting capeability though

october xx

Hey yea you are write i did like it a lot but the whole wife being a wh0re reminds me of my boyfriend it should be Zacks a man wh0re lol jk i really injoyed your poem

Brittney

Hey r u gonna be okay?? how long have u been sober?? just pry to God when u feel u need it... he can help u!!!! u know together u will pull through!!! so yea... this poem is like really sad bu tits also really good!!!!