This is an amazing poem. im adding you to my favorites because this poem was so well done. great job.

I loved your poem, it is so true, and I think everyone feels this way at least once in their life, I gave it a 5/5 keep writing I loved it!!!

Where fragile red paintbrush strokes
Have left their elusive charm.

So meaningful and powerful. Awesome poem all the way through.. Keep writing!

Wow,its amazing. very deep

That was a relly meaningfull poem to me

Wow , its so emotional ,,
i am loving it (K)
5\5

Absolutely beautiful! You have an amazing style and talent!

I like your poems, your a good writer.

Wonderfull job,
thanks for the comment.. btw.

The imagery in this poem, was something rather beautiful. i can understand why this writing means so much, it is very explanitory. i admire your courage to put into words, something as personal and hurtful as this. Your strength is something of an overwhelming achievement. Well Done. Stay Safe, Stay Strong

Naerwen

Very good poem! Very emotional as well. Your a great writer, I read some of your other poems and you have talent girl! Well anyways this poem is really good, and I can understand when you said it saved your life, to me I think writing poetry helps out alot when your feeling down. BTW thank you for commenting on my poem.

Wow this was so touching and beautiful. you have such an amazing talent you should never give up writing. lots of detail and emotion. love it! 10/10 from me chica! BTW thanx for commenting on my poem. im adding you 2 my favorites. your so awesome. ~OnTheRunFromLove~

Your poem was very touching and emotional and i loved reading it keep it up

Ur poem was metphorical i guess.....
good one keep it up....

Wow!! i am left speechless in front of this wonderful poem!! the way you describe this scene and putting it into rhymes was really something to enjoy reading, even though it's kinda sad! keep up the good work and write more touching poems like this one!!!
celi ****
ps:i'm happy to see that only one poem, a few words can change, even save somebody's life! it shows the power of words and of poems that go straight to the heart...

Hello you gave me a really nice comment on my 'cloaked in darkness' poem, so i thought i would have a little looky at yours.

i think this poem is one of the best i have ever read on this site, and probably in my life. it is so filled with imagination and (if i am not mistaken) the metaphor is so creative and i find it unbelievable that someone could have such thoughts and imagination to be able to create such a masterpiece! i tried to pick a particular line or stanza that i liked best but i just couldnt do it, they all fit so well together - the structure is perfect. definitely top marks.

This poem is... amazing, I am left speechless... wow.... I mean , the absolutely wonderful picture you paint here is beyond words to describe... just wow... it's beautiful... and your choice of words is beautiful... I am astounded... I mean, words just can't describe how awesome this poem is.. it's absoultely amazing... and thank you for the comment on my poem.. 5/5 all the way, more if I could!! lol
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

This poem was really good!!!!i love the simily and the words that you chose!its a well done poem!!!

Thnx for da comment and this is really good!! lots of love, Tonya!

Wow I like the way you put things.
what style. a little too deep for
me. but thats because im a moron